Paragraph Problem Writing Activity

insert the paragraphs in the passage below.

There was once a velveteen rabbit and in the beginning he was really splendid. He was fat and bunchy as a rabbit should be; his coat was spotted brown and white he had real thread whiskers and his ears were lined with pink sateen. On Christmas morning when he sat wedged in the top of the Boy's stocking with a sprig of holly between his paws the effect was charming. There were other things in the stocking nuts and oranges and a toy engine and chocolate almonds and a clockwork mouse but the Rabbit was quite the best of all. For at least two hours the Boy loved him and then Aunts and Uncles came to dinner and there was a great rustling of tissue paper and unwrapping of parcels and in the excitement of looking at all the new presents the Velveteen Rabbit was forgotten. For a long time he lived in the toy cupboard or on the nursery floor and no one thought very much about him. He was naturally shy and being only made of velveteen some of the more expensive toys quite snubbed him. The mechanical toys were very superior and looked down upon everyone else; they were full of modern ideas and pretended they were real.

There was once a velveteen rabbit and in the beginning he was really splendid. He was fat and bunchy as a rabbit should be; his coat was spotted brown and white he had real thread whiskers and his ears were lined with pink sateen.

On Christmas morning when he sat wedged in the top of the Boy's stocking with a sprig of holly between his paws the effect was charming. There were other things in the stocking nuts and oranges and a toy engine and chocolate almonds and a clockwork mouse but the Rabbit was quite the best of all. For at least two hours the Boy loved him and then Aunts and Uncles came to dinner and there was a great rustling of tissue paper and unwrapping of parcels and in the excitement of looking at all the new presents the Velveteen Rabbit was forgotten. 

For a long time he lived in the toy cupboard or on the nursery floor and no one thought very much about him. He was naturally shy and being only made of velveteen some of the more expensive toys quite snubbed him. The mechanical toys were very superior and looked down upon everyone else; they were full of modern ideas and pretended they were real.

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What are you most proud of this term in terms of Habitat work?
when writing compound sentences and my follow up

Why are you proud of it?
Because I got it in my head really fast And I put everything thought in my book

What are you least proud of this term?
My lying down moment in time

Why are you not proud of it?
because I did not put all my effort in to it and I did not put detail and did not put a paragraph

Your goal for next term is?
checking my spelling and Edting because when I publish it I get lots of mistakes

10 litracy circle reflection

Reflection

scared moment in time

10  a clock late at night and it's pitch black. I'm watching a movie and it's intermission I'm scared of what's going to happen next? but then suddenly, I heard some thing what could it be? I heard it outside, it sounded like it was moaning

I looked outside I saw something crawling,thinking it was a monster and it was climbing on someones fence. What was it I thought?

I'm thinking if I should go outside or not?I say yes from the outside But from the inside I would never go But still I went. As I opened the door the moaning gets louder and louder. Suddenly it comes right at me I slam the door and run upstairs. I jump into and cover myself soon enough I was sleeping          

litracy circle reflection Zaption

hello this is my reflection on Zaption

good things about it

•  I Like how you can write things on the side while the video is going 
•  you can present work with out talking
• You can  be collaborative with working with other people

                          bad things about it 

• your work can get delted

• When your done and published it you caun't
•  change it again

• it's hard to remember how to use it

 

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