Thursday, November 17, 2016

FRIDAY WEEK 6


✍QUICK WRITE✍


Today I was publishing my narrative writing. I think I should've made the  chapters even longer and it having smaller font and still having it three pages



here is what i have done so far:



The incredible story of the five gems!

CHAPTER: 1
Hunting

Have you ever had  a day you knew you had to do something otherwise you would never to be able to survive in Alaska? Well, that was my day. I had to go hunting with my dad. I tried to make a excuse like yesterday but he didn't fall for that shenanigans again.I shivered as I walked outside. Even though  I had  two Layers  of pants on, three layers t-shirts And a big yellow puffy jacket And that's not all of it! it!Then 2 pairs of socks So I wouldn't get Frostbite!I put my shoes and then put my gloves.Even though I had so many layers on I still felt cold!Well,After a few years I'll get used to it.I've only been in Alaska for 1 year.

CHAPTER:2
Transformation


As me and my dad scurried off into the woods.I saw something shiny the distance
I dashed to it. It was a flower.I have my hands over like a Mockingbird.Feeling a streak of warmness go through me.I pick it up to get a closer look. It had five gems on it.I place it down.I look at my hands they were furry! I patted my body when I got to my face I had a snout! I look behind myself I had a bushy tail! I dash to the nearest lake I look at my  reflection I was a squirrel! I pinch myself wishing it was a dream.

CHAPTER:3
HELP!

I was stuck as a squirrel forever I start
to cry. Then suddenly I see a deer.      
The deer said do you want to know how it happened and how to change back. I said “of course”Well, then you need to listen to me. you know that flower that you picked up.  Well, it had five rubies on it and now they are lost.So now if you want to change you need to swallow them before sunset tommorow. Don’t worry they taste like candyfloss and the ruby’s colours are red, green, blue orange
and purple.

CHAPTER:4
“WHAT WOULD A SQUIRREL DO”

It was getting dark. I had to find somewhere warm and fuzzy. So I could take  a nap.z I saw a forest. I thought “what would a squirrel do” Right then an idea pop into my head I collected so berries and nuts I found a bunch of pine trees. I jumped in to one of the holes in the tree. I sat and started to make a fire. I got a rock for a pillow and start to get comfy.  Heat comes to  my face and start to sleep.
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

CHAPTER:5
NEXT DAY

I wake up. I do a lazy yawn. Then struggle to get up. Firstly I went I went straight away to the deer I talked to yesterday.

CHAPTER:6
FINDING GEMS!


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